The night seems to be so bright,
Night with itself brings a world so peaceful and quiet,
Night bri...
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The night seems to be so bright,
Night with itself brings a world so peaceful and quiet,
Night brings the touch of my mother,
The breeze carries the blessings of my father,
The same breeze brings to me hugs and kisses,
And brings all the blessings and wishes,
Night brings with itself new dreams to live,
I also feel all the hopes that people give,
People see the sunset in the night,
I see the moon which gives the loveliest light,
You see the dark conquering the day,
I see how on a moonlight all hopes are laid!!
Isn't this night so beautiful and serene,
Dosent it tell you how i am so free!!
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Dear Yashasviji,

Am glad you like my take on night .....
Well night is the best time of the whole 24 hours for me......
Your naughtiness always comes as a great reading experience for ur so hope u hv gr8 moments at night....
cheers,
aram
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Beautiful poem
night brings world to a little pause..... it brings dreams and love foryou....
nice points on nights, else every one used night as a dark thing and morning as a bright one
nice to see the change...... I am eXpecially glad, because for naughty people like me night brings EXpecially great moments
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Dear Amy,
You have got the central idea beautifully....
thnx for the comment and appreciation....
rgds,
aram
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Dear DSampatji,
thnx for the comment and appreciation.....
rgds,
aram
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yes............night is a light and as bright as the day time.I feel all light lies within and there is no time out of 24 hrs that one can feel sad becoz Lord made everything beautiful in His own way :)
Amy
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dear aram bhusal.
very well written
liked it...
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Dear Lakshmiji,
I am glad u liked the poem....
thnx for the comment and appreciation....
rgds,
aram
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Dear Matheikal sir,
well i wanted there to be a bit of irony.... I will take care of this in my later posts... Thnx for ur suggestion...
rgds,
aram
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Aram
Enjoyed this one
lakshmi
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A poem that vibrates with positive feelings. "... the dark conquering the day" seems to be a little out of place in a poem where there's so much 'brightness'.
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